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    Amin Sorour
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    Preparing for my IELTS Writing tasks # 2

    Today, technology uses has been extremely increased in the last few years throughout the world. This is apparent in every where around us. It is disagreed that technology will replace teachers in classrooms. This will be proven by analyzing how teachers can adjusting their approaches to the needs of their students as well as motivate and discipline them in order to achieve success in their academic life.
    Teachers can always change their ways of teaching, approaches and methodologies to fit with different students during a classroom. For instance, if students in any given class are having trouble understanding a classroom topic, the teacher can rephrase the topic and deliver it in a more effective way. Technological solutions wouldn’t be able to interact with students otherwise, technology will be incapable to be an effective way of teaching because the difference in mentality and personality between students. Thus, technology can’t be replacing teachers in classrooms.
    Motivation and discipline are other key factors to student’s academic success. This is clearly apparent when teaching to children as children required much more motivation and discipline to help them to think actively and effectively. A computerized teacher can’t accomplish this as certain situations require judgment to ensure that the student is acting in appropriate manner. After analyzing this point, it is clearly proven that teachers will always be needed in the classrooms.
    As a result of analyzing both of teacher’s ability of changing teaching approaches and how they motivate and discipline their students as well, it is appear clearly that technology can’t replace human teachers in classrooms. Further, in next few years, it expected that technological solutions will me more and more valuable assets in addition to human teachers to help them to improve the educational life quality and help more and more teachers to accomplish their message to the social community.

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    Sincerely
    Amin SOROUR
    Senior Project Controls Engineer
    BSc, PMP

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    نايف علي
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    Cool

    WoooW



    goooood idea from brother

    i am so happy to share together my paragraphs


    let us start and please correct me if any


    I was starting a new project English language development for me before a few days ago . In fact , i have change level quickly in my English communication skills In the four skills (listing , speaking , writing and reading) .This experiment tells me that at any project about learning English needs me to be honest with my self to find the best strategy that help me , forget any disgust or horror about the language and endure the program although the difficulty of it. Finally , step by step I will go to the top .



    goooooood luck and i will come back again

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    إذا اعتاد الفتى خوض المنايا ::: فأهون مايمر به الوحول

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    العبد الفقير
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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Amin Sorour مشاهدة المشاركة
    Dear Sir or Madam;
    I am writing this letter in regards to several problems with public transport system which increasing from day to another.
    Unfortunately; serious problems have been arise with the last few months such as timing, waiting period between trips, vehicles conditions and stations conditions. You know I live in downtown and my work place is at out of the city on B ring road, so on daily bases I might use one of the public transportation system by way or another, I am waiting more than 20 minutes if I miss my bus to catch the other trip. Further it is not easy to find a place on station to set or even to wait especially in winter seasons. Moreover the distance between stations and main areas this is too far. As you can see most of public community suffers from almost the same reasons.
    I understand that, the population is so much to serve, but some actions need to took place as soon to maximize the current system efficiency for instance; make sure bus’s drivers strictly with the timing schedule by make quality control and quality assurance audits, extend the stations to be ready to receive more waiting people, increase the total number of public vehicles to minimize the waiting time between trips and regular roads maintenance to be ready to receive more vehicles.

    هذا هو تعديلي

    I am writing this letter in regards to several problems with public transport system which increasing from day to another.
    Unfortunately; serious problems have been arise with the last few months such as timing, waiting period between trips, vehicles conditions and stations conditions. I live in downtown and my work place is at out of the city on B ring road, so on daily bases I might use one of the public transportation system by one way or another, I am waiting more than 20 minutes if I miss my bus to catch the other trip. Furthermore it is not easy to find a place on station to set or even to wait especially in winter seasons. Moreover the distance between stations and main areas this is too far. As you can see most of public community suffers from the same reasons.
    I understand that, the population is too much to be served, but some actions need to be taken urgently to maximize the current system efficiency for instance; please make sure bus’s drivers strictly with the timing schedule by make quality control and quality assurance audits, extend the stations to be ready to receive more waiting people, increase the total number of public vehicles to minimize the waiting time between trips and regular roads maintenance to be ready to receive more vehicles.
    I trust that you will take this matter seriously and strive to improve this issue.

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    العبد الفقير إلى رحمة الله الواسعة...

    وتعر من ثوبين من يلبسهما*** يلقى الردى بمذمة وهوان
    ثوب من الجهل المركب فوقه*** ثوب التعصب بئست الثوبان
    وتحل بالانصاف أفخر حلة*** زينت بها الأعطاف والكتفان
    واجعل شعارك خشية الرحمن مع*** نصح الرسول فحبذا الأمران

    نونية ابن القيم


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    العبد الفقير
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    الصورة الرمزية العبد الفقير


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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Amin Sorour مشاهدة المشاركة
    Today, technology uses has been extremely increased in the last few years throughout the world. This is apparent in every where around us. It is disagreed that technology will replace teachers in classrooms. This will be proven by analyzing how teachers can adjusting their approaches to the needs of their students as well as motivate and discipline them in order to achieve success in their academic life.
    Teachers can always change their ways of teaching, approaches and methodologies to fit with different students during a classroom. For instance, if students in any given class are having trouble understanding a classroom topic, the teacher can rephrase the topic and deliver it in a more effective way. Technological solutions wouldn’t be able to interact with students otherwise, technology will be incapable to be an effective way of teaching because the difference in mentality and personality between students. Thus, technology can’t be replacing teachers in classrooms.
    Motivation and discipline are other key factors to student’s academic success. This is clearly apparent when teaching to children as children required much more motivation and discipline to help them to think actively and effectively. A computerized teacher can’t accomplish this as certain situations require judgment to ensure that the student is acting in appropriate manner. After analyzing this point, it is clearly proven that teachers will always be needed in the classrooms.
    As a result of analyzing both of teacher’s ability of changing teaching approaches and how they motivate and discipline their students as well, it is appear clearly that technology can’t replace human teachers in classrooms. Further, in next few years, it expected that technological solutions will me more and more valuable assets in addition to human teachers to help them to improve the educational life quality and help more and more teachers to accomplish their message to the social community.
    أقتراحي للفقرة الجديدة

    Today, technology uses has been extremely increased in the last few years throughout the world. This is apparent in every where around us. It is urged that technology will replace teachers in classrooms. This will be proven by analyzing how teachers can adjusting their approaches to the needs of their students as well as motivate and discipline them in order to achieve success in their academic life.
    Teachers can always change their ways of teaching, approaches and methodologies to fit with variety of students during a classroom. For instance, if students in any class are having trouble understanding a classroom topic, the teacher can rephrase the topic and deliver it in a more effective way. Technological solutions wouldn’t be able to interact with students otherwise, technology will be incapable to be an effective way of teaching because the difference in mentality and personality between students. Hence, technology can’t be replacing teachers in classrooms.
    Motivation and discipline are other key factors to student’s academic success. This is clearly apparent when teaching to children as children required much more motivation and discipline to help them to think actively and effectively. A computerized teacher can’t accomplish this as certain situations require judgment to ensure that the student is acting in appropriate manner. After analyzing this point, it is clearly proven that teachers will always be compulsory in the classrooms.
    As a result of analyzing both of teacher’s ability of changing teaching approaches and how they motivate and discipline their students as well, it is appear clearly that technology can’t replace human teachers in classrooms. Furthermore, in next few years, it forecasted that technological solutions will me more and more valuable assets in addition to human teachers to help them to improve the educational life quality and help more and more teachers to accomplish their message to the social community.

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    العبد الفقير إلى رحمة الله الواسعة...

    وتعر من ثوبين من يلبسهما*** يلقى الردى بمذمة وهوان
    ثوب من الجهل المركب فوقه*** ثوب التعصب بئست الثوبان
    وتحل بالانصاف أفخر حلة*** زينت بها الأعطاف والكتفان
    واجعل شعارك خشية الرحمن مع*** نصح الرسول فحبذا الأمران

    نونية ابن القيم


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    العبد الفقير
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    عضو فائق التميز
    الصورة الرمزية العبد الفقير


    تاريخ التسجيل: Jan 2005
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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة نايف علي مشاهدة المشاركة
    WoooW



    goooood idea from brother

    i am so happy to share together my paragraphs


    let us start and please correct me if any


    I was starting a new project English language development for me before a few days ago . In fact , i have change level quickly in my English communication skills In the four skills (listing , speaking , writing and reading) .This experiment tells me that at any project about learning English needs me to be honest with my self to find the best strategy that help me , forget any disgust or horror about the language and endure the program although the difficulty of it. Finally , step by step I will go to the top .



    goooooood luck and i will come back again

    هذا هو تعديلي

    I have started a new English course for me before a few days ago. In matter of fact, I have changed my level rapidly in my English communication skills In the fourth level(listing , speaking , writing and reading) .This experiment tell me that at any project about learning English needs me to be honest with myself to find the best strategy that help me , forget any mistake about the language and cope with the program ,in spite the difficulty of it. Finally , step by step I will go to the top

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    العبد الفقير إلى رحمة الله الواسعة...

    وتعر من ثوبين من يلبسهما*** يلقى الردى بمذمة وهوان
    ثوب من الجهل المركب فوقه*** ثوب التعصب بئست الثوبان
    وتحل بالانصاف أفخر حلة*** زينت بها الأعطاف والكتفان
    واجعل شعارك خشية الرحمن مع*** نصح الرسول فحبذا الأمران

    نونية ابن القيم


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    التوربييني80
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    تاريخ التسجيل: Jan 2010
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    thank you, I want to ask you a question have confused me.
    What does this sentence mean " the movie is set in Egypt in the 1990s
    What is difference between set in and filmed.

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    العبد الفقير
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    عضو فائق التميز
    الصورة الرمزية العبد الفقير


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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة التوربييني80 مشاهدة المشاركة
    thank you, I want to ask you a question have confused me.
    What does this sentence mean " the movie is set in Egypt in the 1990s
    What is difference between set in and filmed.
    thanks
    I think it is the same

    please check this website

    http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/set

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    العبد الفقير إلى رحمة الله الواسعة...

    وتعر من ثوبين من يلبسهما*** يلقى الردى بمذمة وهوان
    ثوب من الجهل المركب فوقه*** ثوب التعصب بئست الثوبان
    وتحل بالانصاف أفخر حلة*** زينت بها الأعطاف والكتفان
    واجعل شعارك خشية الرحمن مع*** نصح الرسول فحبذا الأمران

    نونية ابن القيم


  
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