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    الصورة الرمزية العبد الفقير
    العبد الفقير
    العبد الفقير غير متواجد حالياً

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    Put your paragraph/sentence for correction and improvement

    All candidates/members who want to correct their paragraph are requested to submit/present their paragraph in this page

    من مواضيع العبد الفقير :


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    العبد الفقير إلى رحمة الله الواسعة...

    وتعر من ثوبين من يلبسهما*** يلقى الردى بمذمة وهوان
    ثوب من الجهل المركب فوقه*** ثوب التعصب بئست الثوبان
    وتحل بالانصاف أفخر حلة*** زينت بها الأعطاف والكتفان
    واجعل شعارك خشية الرحمن مع*** نصح الرسول فحبذا الأمران

    نونية ابن القيم


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    Abo Fares
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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة العبد الفقير مشاهدة المشاركة
    All candidates/members who want to correct their paragraph are requested to submit/present their paragraph in this page

    Hello brother, how are you??
    :)

    I think you mean that one of us should write a paragraph, and turn it in to this thread... then we all can discuss this paragraph and check the mistakes, if any... right??


    It's really a good idea, thanks alot... Hope we see a good interaction in this thread


    ok, i'll be the first victim , and i'll add the first paragraph in the next post


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    Abo Fares
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    Post My paragraph is gonna be about a new trend that exists in our life

    My paragraph is gonna be about a new trend that exists in our life



    This is an image of the paragraph from the word software program, which i used first to type my paragraph on:





    Using the internet for getting and reading e-books instead of reading hard copies of books is a very big prosperous change that our society is living in the recent years. In the past, in order to study or to do some research, we had to go to the libraries to search for maybe a specific small piece of information among the accumulated books. To move this book, put that one there, and change the whole arrangement of the library, we really could make a big mess and damage the library. However, now we can find a countless number of e-books via surfing the net, by which we can easily and quickly find the piece of information that we were looking for. For instance, I'm preparing now the master thesis in order to get the master's degree. If I couldn't get an access to the net, I wouldn't benefit of the abundance of the e-books that exist on the net. As a conclusion, we can say that we're living now a big change when using the internet for getting information and reading books, and we should really celebrate this change.


    :)



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    العبد الفقير
    العبد الفقير غير متواجد حالياً
    عضو فائق التميز
    الصورة الرمزية العبد الفقير


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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أبو الحلول مشاهدة المشاركة


    Hello brother, how are you??
    :)

    I think you mean that one of us should write a paragraph, and turn it in to this thread... then we all can discuss this paragraph and check the mistakes, if any... right??


    It's really a good idea, thanks alot... Hope we see a good interaction in this thread


    ok, i'll be the first victim , and i'll add the first paragraph in the next post

    fine thanks, how about you brother?

    Yes,that what I want to say

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    العبد الفقير إلى رحمة الله الواسعة...

    وتعر من ثوبين من يلبسهما*** يلقى الردى بمذمة وهوان
    ثوب من الجهل المركب فوقه*** ثوب التعصب بئست الثوبان
    وتحل بالانصاف أفخر حلة*** زينت بها الأعطاف والكتفان
    واجعل شعارك خشية الرحمن مع*** نصح الرسول فحبذا الأمران

    نونية ابن القيم


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    العبد الفقير
    العبد الفقير غير متواجد حالياً
    عضو فائق التميز
    الصورة الرمزية العبد الفقير


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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أبو الحلول مشاهدة المشاركة
    My paragraph is gonna be about a new trend that exists in our life



    This is an image of the paragraph from the word software program, which i used first to type my paragraph on:





    Using the internet for getting and reading e-books instead of reading hard copies of books is a very big prosperous change that our society is living in the recent years. In the past, in order to study or to do some research, we had to go to the libraries to search for maybe a specific small piece of information among the accumulated books. To move this book, put that one there, and change the whole arrangement of the library, we really could make a big mess and damage the library. However, now we can find a countless number of e-books via surfing the net, by which we can easily and quickly find the piece of information that we were looking for. For instance, I'm preparing now the master thesis in order to get the master's degree. If I couldn't get an access to the net, I wouldn't benefit of the abundance of the e-books that exist on the net. As a conclusion, we can say that we're living now a big change when using the internet for getting information and reading books, and we should really celebrate this change.


    :)



    Thanks for your topic, for your sentence (as a conclusion) I don’t really prefer it, because that is the first time I heard this sentence, maybe it is true but I ‘m not sure.

    I prefer to use sentence like (to conclude)

    The other point is (we're living now a big change), I am not sure about the grammar, are you sure it is not (we're living now in a big change)

    The third point I prefer to use word like “Evolution” rather than “Change” ,for my point view It is better because Evolution mean big change

    I hope members comments also

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    العبد الفقير إلى رحمة الله الواسعة...

    وتعر من ثوبين من يلبسهما*** يلقى الردى بمذمة وهوان
    ثوب من الجهل المركب فوقه*** ثوب التعصب بئست الثوبان
    وتحل بالانصاف أفخر حلة*** زينت بها الأعطاف والكتفان
    واجعل شعارك خشية الرحمن مع*** نصح الرسول فحبذا الأمران

    نونية ابن القيم


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    Abo Fares
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    Hello brother :) , thanks alot for commenting and checking my mistakes. From this discussion, we all can benefit of each others' mistakes......... Goooooo ahead


    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة العبد الفقير مشاهدة المشاركة
    Thanks for your topic, for your sentence (as a conclusion) I don’t really prefer it, because that is the first time I heard this sentence, maybe it is true but I ‘m not sure.

    I prefer to use sentence like (to conclude)
    You know what??? You're right
    :D

    Actually we should use (in conclusion) .. thanks alot



    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة العبد الفقير مشاهدة المشاركة
    The other point is (we're living now a big change), I am not sure about the grammar, are you sure it is not (we're living now in a big change)
    hmm, maybe you're right




    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة العبد الفقير مشاهدة المشاركة
    The third point I prefer to use word like “Evolution” rather than “Change” ,for my point view It is better because Evolution mean big change
    Ok, it's another meaning that we can use for the "new trend", thanks alot.. but "change" is not wrong



    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة العبد الفقير مشاهدة المشاركة
    I hope members comments also
    I hope so.... Don't worry guys, i have forgotten that i'm an observer here , you can citisize me strongly.. there's no red or yellow cards looooool


    Sweeet regaards






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    العبد الفقير
    العبد الفقير غير متواجد حالياً
    عضو فائق التميز
    الصورة الرمزية العبد الفقير


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    Yes "change" is not wrong, but usually people/English examiners like to use fancy/unusual words

    Thanks Brother

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    العبد الفقير إلى رحمة الله الواسعة...

    وتعر من ثوبين من يلبسهما*** يلقى الردى بمذمة وهوان
    ثوب من الجهل المركب فوقه*** ثوب التعصب بئست الثوبان
    وتحل بالانصاف أفخر حلة*** زينت بها الأعطاف والكتفان
    واجعل شعارك خشية الرحمن مع*** نصح الرسول فحبذا الأمران

    نونية ابن القيم


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    العبد الفقير
    العبد الفقير غير متواجد حالياً
    عضو فائق التميز
    الصورة الرمزية العبد الفقير


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    And I have another point , which is regarding "celebrate" , this word usually used after gaining a trophy or degree directly
    I prefer to use Elated

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    العبد الفقير إلى رحمة الله الواسعة...

    وتعر من ثوبين من يلبسهما*** يلقى الردى بمذمة وهوان
    ثوب من الجهل المركب فوقه*** ثوب التعصب بئست الثوبان
    وتحل بالانصاف أفخر حلة*** زينت بها الأعطاف والكتفان
    واجعل شعارك خشية الرحمن مع*** نصح الرسول فحبذا الأمران

    نونية ابن القيم


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    Abo Fares
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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة العبد الفقير مشاهدة المشاركة
    And I have another point , which is regarding "celebrate" , this word usually used after gaining a trophy or degree directly
    I prefer to use Elated
    Hello brother, how are you??
    :)

    Thanks alot for your cooperation, and soooo sorry cause i'm late.. you know, ramadan time
    :)

    For your comment.. I think it's an expression that we can use, isn't it??... i could be convinced with your idea, but i'm not sure because i used it once when i was talking to a native speaker and he didn't comment... Maybe he was so respected, and he didn't tell me that i made a mistake looool

    Thanks again


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    Amin Sorour
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    الصورة الرمزية Amin Sorour


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    Preparing for my IELTS Writing tasks

    Dear Sir or Madam;
    I am writing this letter in regards to several problems with public transport system which increasing from day to another.
    Unfortunately; serious problems have been arise with the last few months such as timing, waiting period between trips, vehicles conditions and stations conditions. You know I live in downtown and my work place is at out of the city on B ring road, so on daily bases I might use one of the public transportation system by way or another, I am waiting more than 20 minutes if I miss my bus to catch the other trip. Further it is not easy to find a place on station to set or even to wait especially in winter seasons. Moreover the distance between stations and main areas this is too far. As you can see most of public community suffers from almost the same reasons.
    I understand that, the population is so much to serve, but some actions need to took place as soon to maximize the current system efficiency for instance; make sure bus’s drivers strictly with the timing schedule by make quality control and quality assurance audits, extend the stations to be ready to receive more waiting people, increase the total number of public vehicles to minimize the waiting time between trips and regular roads maintenance to be ready to receive more vehicles.

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    Sincerely
    Amin SOROUR
    Senior Project Controls Engineer
    BSc, PMP

  
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