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    الصورة الرمزية meee
    meee
    meee غير متواجد حالياً

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    You are strong in English...! Let's play

    G'day,

    I think the best way to improve 'anything' is by exercising. Think we can get on together using our skills..!!!

    The game is;
    Writing a short story, article ..etc "less than 100 words, I'd say" . The member wants to practise 'auditor' needs to go through the story, article...etc and tries to correct grammar, spelling ..etc. "with reasons for each correction"

    Then, the auditor 'the next member' needs writing its own >>> and so one.

    If no mistakes found, that means YOU ARE STRONG ..:rolleyes:

    Ready..! Find some mistakes

    Three days a go I went with a friends of mine to the shops. I drink a milk, Sami bought bag and John got lost..! We try to find John but it seemed noway, called another friends to help but everyone were busy. At the end of the day, we gone home and John there.

    enD.

    Please don't say thanks and run.

    Regards,


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    المهندسة ريتاج
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    عضو فعال جداً
    الصورة الرمزية المهندسة ريتاج


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    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة meee مشاهدة المشاركة
    Ready..! Find some mistakes




    Three days a go I went with a friends of mine to the shops. I drink a milk, Sami bought bag and John got lost..! We try to find John but it seemed noway, called another friends to help but everyone were busy. At the end of the day, we gone home and John there.
    "i think the correct for your story is"we tried"not"we try"
    ."i drunk"not "idrink
    weeeeeeee bs
    thanks for u

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    يا قارئ خطي لا تبكي على موتي .. فاليوم أنا معك وغداً في التراب .. فإن عشت فإني معك وإن مت فاللذكرى ..! ويا ماراً على قبري لا تعجب من أمري.. بالأمس كنت معك وغداً أنت معي .. أمـــوت و يـبـقـى كـل مـا كـتـبـتـــه ذكــرى فيـا ليت كـل من قـرأ خطـي دعـى لي

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    sniperone
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    also we went or we have gone

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    أمير صبحي
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    الصورة الرمزية أمير صبحي


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    a new real story :

    one day ,while i was going to the factory where there is my work , i saw avery strange woman at the parking of the factory .

    she seems to be boor but in the same time she has some wealth features which appear from her strange good looking .

    as , when i just has parked my car she came and stand near my car laying on it and doing asmiley greetings with her hands .

    although what she did i didnt pay her any attention just i check my car doors center locking and go ahead to my office inside.


    after the day work and while i was leaving the company door with my friends i saw the woman at the same place i left her in the early morning doing some make up in her face ...this enhance adoupt feeling inside me .


    i went to my car as usual while she was steering on me


    at this instant , she asked me politely
    " can you give me alift with you to the mid town where the station "


    i said - with arough accent - :

    " why you dont take the bus

    refering to the bus plat form .....


    she said nothing while trying to open my car door in the other side of me

    i think for a while .......

    then , i applogize for her to stay in the back seat and dont speak with me absolutely in the way to her station
    .........


    ....to be continuied


    this part include four mistakes

    GRAMMAR & VOCABULARY




    thank you for all

    ..


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    قِف دون رأيك في الحياة مجاهداً --- إن الحياة عقيدة وجهاد

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    meee
    meee غير متواجد حالياً
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    الصورة الرمزية meee


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    المهندسة ريتاج

    Good try, your answer is correct. "Another "good try" to be STRONGER :p "

    sniperone

    "we went or we have gone"

    Yes that's true "Seems you are STRONG, but need more ;) "

    But
    أمير صبحي

    you should have ,at least, tried to find some mistakes before putting your 'short story'. Please give sometime before "continue the story".

    Found more than 12 mistakes in your story! But will leave it to other participants!

    I think;

    Three days ago I went with a friends of mine to the shops.
    Three days ago I went with friends of mine to the shops. (or with a friend )

    I drink a milk, Sami bought bag and John got lost..!
    I drunk milk, Sami bought a bag and John got lost..!

    We try to find John but it seemed noway, called another friends to help but everyone were busy.
    We tried to find John but it seemed noway, called another friend (or "other friends") to help but everyone was busy.

    At the end of the day, we gone home and John there
    At the end of the day, we went home and John was there

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    ghani20004
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    [FONT="Arial"][/FONT Three days a go I went with a friends of mine to the shops. I drink a milk, Sami bought bag and John got lost..! We try to find John but it seemed noway, called another friends to help but everyone were busy. At the end of the day, we gone home and .John there
    1- I went with friends
    2- without of mine it's a repetition
    3- I drank
    4- a bag, not bag
    5- tried
    6- him, not John again it's a repetition
    7- to be impossible, noway can't be used in this case
    8- I called other friends, not called an other friends
    9- was busy
    10- we went home, or we have gone home
    11- and left him there, not we gone home john there.

    that's all thank you.

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    عبده عبد المجيد
    عبده عبد المجيد غير متواجد حالياً
    عضو فعال جداً


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    thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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    meee
    meee غير متواجد حالياً
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    الصورة الرمزية meee


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    ghani20004

    Your answer is a collection of the other answers! Or you may not read the other answer, if so, you are STRONG , I believe . But where is your story!

    Or a correction to
    ( أمير صبحي )

    عبده عبد المجيد

    Please don't say thanks and run :rolleyes:.

    Regards

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